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Tuesday, November 10, 2009
thank you letter for financial assistance
SAMPLE LETTER (1 OF 3)
You should not copy it exactly.
Most donors receive several letters, and we do not want them to be identical.
February 1, 2005
Mrs. Darlene L. Millard
888 Patty Smith Court
San Francisco, CA 93452
Dear Mrs. Millard:
My name is Sarah Barnes, and I am a junior Finance major at the University of Iowa. I am
honored to receive the Millard Business Scholarship this year. I would like to thank you for your
generosity and thoughtfulness in regards to this award.
I am pleased with the education I have received at the University of Iowa, as well as the
invaluable learning experiences this institution has made available to me that have expanded and
strengthened my education. For example, in addition to my finance coursework, I am the
Treasurer for the student-run, on-campus organization, Dance Marathon. (Dance Marathon
raises money for children being treated in the pediatric oncology unit of the Children’s Hospital of
Iowa.) Upon graduation from the University of Iowa, I hope to carry this knowledge into the
financial services industry working as either a junior securities analyst or an economist with an
investment firm. My ultimate career goal is to become an investment portfolio manager.
I cannot begin to tell you the many ways your scholarship will assist me as I pursue my
educational and career goals. I am extremely grateful for your support.
Sincerely,
Sarah Barnes
SAMPLE LETTER (2 OF 3)
You should not copy it exactly.
Most donors receive several letters, and we do not want them to be identical.
February 1, 2005
Mrs. Darlene L. Millard
888 Patty Smith Court
San Francisco, CA 93452
Dear Mrs. Millard,
Things we do in life often have measurable results but the extent of their impact is often difficult to
quantify. The Millard Business Scholarship, which you have so generously donated to the
College of Business, has had an impact upon me far beyond the obvious and measurable
financial help.
This year, as a senior majoring in Finance, I am already feeling nostalgic. I have begun to
wonder, “How can I give back to this place that has given me so much?” Your gift serves as an
example of the impact I would like to have beyond my graduation.
In receiving this scholarship, I am touched not only by your generosity but also by our shared
desire to give back to this great college. You have eased my financial burden but equally
important, if not more so, you have allowed me an opportunity to see the impact such a gift has
on a student’s point-of-view. I feel a kinship and camaraderie with your husband, a man whom I
never had the opportunity to meet, because we have a shared experience. I feel pride in being
selected to receive this gift. I feel a responsibility to uphold the expectations that accompany
such an honor. And, I feel an excitement to some day be in your position, giving back to the
institution that has helped build the foundation for the rest of my life.
This summer, I will begin my career in Chicago with The Northern Trust Company. As I move to
the next phase of my life, I will remain strongly tied to my roots here at the College of Business
and the people, like yourself, who have helped shape my collegiate experience.
Thank you for your gift and the “immeasurable” impact it has had on me.
Sincerely,
Samantha Cross
SAMPLE LETTER (3 OF 3)
You should not copy it exactly.
Most donors receive several letters, and we do not want them to be identical.
February 1, 2005
Jane Doe
555 Main St.
City, State ZIPCODE
Dear Ms. Doe,
It is with deep gratitude I write this letter to thank you for you generous scholarship support
through the 2005 Jane Doe Scholarship. It’s especially meaningful to write to you once again this
year, as I received your scholarship last year. This support for two years means a great deal for
me – I’m very proud to share this connection with you, and I am extremely grateful for your
financial assistance.
Your willingness to maintain strong ties to the University of Iowa and the College of Business is
an inspiration as I begin to reflect on my college years and plan for graduation. I’m beginning to
realize just how instrumental this academic community has been in shaping who I am and my
goals for the future. As a junior Marketing and Journalism major, I have found a number of
opportunities both inside and outside the classroom in the College of Business that have
encouraged my decision to pursue a career in integrated marketing communications. One of
these opportunities has been serving as a communications consultant in the Business Writing
Center. In this position, I work one-on-one with students to improve their written assignments and
communication skills. I have been able to form important connections with faculty, staff and
students through this position, and it’s motivated me to further pursue a career in marketing
communications.
Your scholarship serves as an exciting challenge for me to maintain and improve my level of
achievement before graduation. It is also an important connection to someone else who has had
a meaningful experience at the University of Iowa. I look forward to strengthening my own ties in
the coming years to this academic community and someday being able to support students as
you do today.
Thank you once again for your generous support.
Sincerely,
Frank Jones
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You should not copy it exactly.
Most donors receive several letters, and we do not want them to be identical.
February 1, 2005
Mrs. Darlene L. Millard
888 Patty Smith Court
San Francisco, CA 93452
Dear Mrs. Millard:
My name is Sarah Barnes, and I am a junior Finance major at the University of Iowa. I am
honored to receive the Millard Business Scholarship this year. I would like to thank you for your
generosity and thoughtfulness in regards to this award.
I am pleased with the education I have received at the University of Iowa, as well as the
invaluable learning experiences this institution has made available to me that have expanded and
strengthened my education. For example, in addition to my finance coursework, I am the
Treasurer for the student-run, on-campus organization, Dance Marathon. (Dance Marathon
raises money for children being treated in the pediatric oncology unit of the Children’s Hospital of
Iowa.) Upon graduation from the University of Iowa, I hope to carry this knowledge into the
financial services industry working as either a junior securities analyst or an economist with an
investment firm. My ultimate career goal is to become an investment portfolio manager.
I cannot begin to tell you the many ways your scholarship will assist me as I pursue my
educational and career goals. I am extremely grateful for your support.
Sincerely,
Sarah Barnes
SAMPLE LETTER (2 OF 3)
You should not copy it exactly.
Most donors receive several letters, and we do not want them to be identical.
February 1, 2005
Mrs. Darlene L. Millard
888 Patty Smith Court
San Francisco, CA 93452
Dear Mrs. Millard,
Things we do in life often have measurable results but the extent of their impact is often difficult to
quantify. The Millard Business Scholarship, which you have so generously donated to the
College of Business, has had an impact upon me far beyond the obvious and measurable
financial help.
This year, as a senior majoring in Finance, I am already feeling nostalgic. I have begun to
wonder, “How can I give back to this place that has given me so much?” Your gift serves as an
example of the impact I would like to have beyond my graduation.
In receiving this scholarship, I am touched not only by your generosity but also by our shared
desire to give back to this great college. You have eased my financial burden but equally
important, if not more so, you have allowed me an opportunity to see the impact such a gift has
on a student’s point-of-view. I feel a kinship and camaraderie with your husband, a man whom I
never had the opportunity to meet, because we have a shared experience. I feel pride in being
selected to receive this gift. I feel a responsibility to uphold the expectations that accompany
such an honor. And, I feel an excitement to some day be in your position, giving back to the
institution that has helped build the foundation for the rest of my life.
This summer, I will begin my career in Chicago with The Northern Trust Company. As I move to
the next phase of my life, I will remain strongly tied to my roots here at the College of Business
and the people, like yourself, who have helped shape my collegiate experience.
Thank you for your gift and the “immeasurable” impact it has had on me.
Sincerely,
Samantha Cross
SAMPLE LETTER (3 OF 3)
You should not copy it exactly.
Most donors receive several letters, and we do not want them to be identical.
February 1, 2005
Jane Doe
555 Main St.
City, State ZIPCODE
Dear Ms. Doe,
It is with deep gratitude I write this letter to thank you for you generous scholarship support
through the 2005 Jane Doe Scholarship. It’s especially meaningful to write to you once again this
year, as I received your scholarship last year. This support for two years means a great deal for
me – I’m very proud to share this connection with you, and I am extremely grateful for your
financial assistance.
Your willingness to maintain strong ties to the University of Iowa and the College of Business is
an inspiration as I begin to reflect on my college years and plan for graduation. I’m beginning to
realize just how instrumental this academic community has been in shaping who I am and my
goals for the future. As a junior Marketing and Journalism major, I have found a number of
opportunities both inside and outside the classroom in the College of Business that have
encouraged my decision to pursue a career in integrated marketing communications. One of
these opportunities has been serving as a communications consultant in the Business Writing
Center. In this position, I work one-on-one with students to improve their written assignments and
communication skills. I have been able to form important connections with faculty, staff and
students through this position, and it’s motivated me to further pursue a career in marketing
communications.
Your scholarship serves as an exciting challenge for me to maintain and improve my level of
achievement before graduation. It is also an important connection to someone else who has had
a meaningful experience at the University of Iowa. I look forward to strengthening my own ties in
the coming years to this academic community and someday being able to support students as
you do today.
Thank you once again for your generous support.
Sincerely,
Frank Jones
ACADEMIC APPEAL
ACADEMIC APPEAL
Difficulty Completing Courses
Note this letter is based on an actual request received by the PVCC Office of Student Financial Assistance. Specific details, name and address have been changed to protect the student’s privacy.
Bee A. Success
20 Overton Street
Phoenix, AZ 85032
June 15, 2004
Dear Office of Student Financial Assistance:
I am appealing my financial aid suspension because of difficulty completing my courses. Last semester was my first semester at PVCC. I believe that my work schedule prevented me from meeting Satisfactory Academic Progress. I worked 40+ hours a week. Without financial aid I would not be able to take the courses I need to be admitted to ASU.
The Steps I am going to take or have taken to assure successful academic progress in the future:
Cut back on my work hours so that I may have more time to study.
Obtain a tutor for the classes I find difficult. I have made myself familiar with the tutoring center on campus.
Meet with each of my instructors a talk with them about what they believe will make me a better student in their class.
Go to the scheduled office hours of each instructor when I am having difficulty with the class material.
Develop a relationship with other students to form study groups.
Talk with my advisor at ASU who is assisting me in my transfer process. She advises me of the classes and hours I need to be admitted to ASU.
Go to class on time as scheduled.
I believe that I was letting work get in the way of school. My schedule was very demanding and it left little time to study. I have cut my hours back to 32-36 per week in order to have more time to study.
I have talked with my ASU advisor. She is aware of my current situation and has signed a contract with me in order so I might attend ASU. I hope to complete my B.S. in bio-chemistry at ASU. Without financial aid, I lack the ability to continue on with my education. I am a hard working student and the upcoming semester will prove so. My education is of paramount importance to me. Thank you for your time.
Sincerely yours.
Bee A. Success
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Difficulty Completing Courses
Note this letter is based on an actual request received by the PVCC Office of Student Financial Assistance. Specific details, name and address have been changed to protect the student’s privacy.
Bee A. Success
20 Overton Street
Phoenix, AZ 85032
June 15, 2004
Dear Office of Student Financial Assistance:
I am appealing my financial aid suspension because of difficulty completing my courses. Last semester was my first semester at PVCC. I believe that my work schedule prevented me from meeting Satisfactory Academic Progress. I worked 40+ hours a week. Without financial aid I would not be able to take the courses I need to be admitted to ASU.
The Steps I am going to take or have taken to assure successful academic progress in the future:
Cut back on my work hours so that I may have more time to study.
Obtain a tutor for the classes I find difficult. I have made myself familiar with the tutoring center on campus.
Meet with each of my instructors a talk with them about what they believe will make me a better student in their class.
Go to the scheduled office hours of each instructor when I am having difficulty with the class material.
Develop a relationship with other students to form study groups.
Talk with my advisor at ASU who is assisting me in my transfer process. She advises me of the classes and hours I need to be admitted to ASU.
Go to class on time as scheduled.
I believe that I was letting work get in the way of school. My schedule was very demanding and it left little time to study. I have cut my hours back to 32-36 per week in order to have more time to study.
I have talked with my ASU advisor. She is aware of my current situation and has signed a contract with me in order so I might attend ASU. I hope to complete my B.S. in bio-chemistry at ASU. Without financial aid, I lack the ability to continue on with my education. I am a hard working student and the upcoming semester will prove so. My education is of paramount importance to me. Thank you for your time.
Sincerely yours.
Bee A. Success
Tuesday, October 6, 2009
Thursday, October 1, 2009
enrolling
I was about to enroll then, when my mother told me that my father was rushed to the hospital. She told me that he had fallen from a roof top. His head cracked and his body was injured .Suddenly my life turned into blur. It was painful to realize that my father is dying. I saw my mother crying in the hospital-helpless. I decided to be strong for my family. We don’t have any relatives here, so we can only cling to each other. Every day we look for money. The medicines were so costly that we couldn’t afford to buy them all. My father was always in pain. We have tried almost everything to get money from all resources, but still we can’t make it through. The doctor told us that if he will not be operated soon, the blood will continue to clot in his brain. I don’t know what to do. I went in a chapel and ask God for his mercy. I have been faithful to him and still I am. I know that he will never leave my family; he will help me and will never let my father die. He had his plans and I know it’s for good. All I have to do is to trust him. I went home hoping that God would answer me. I was on my way home when I saw a wallet slid down from a woman riding a motorcycle. I immediately pick up the wallet and look for any identification. I was surprised to see a bundle of money straight from the bank. I was very happy because God had answered my prayers. Now, my father can be operated. But the realization came rushing down my spine. The money isn’t mine, it’s a sin. This is not God’s answer to my prayers. There could be something else. I thank God for giving me a clear mind amidst my darkest hours. After I entrusted the wallet in a radio station, I wearily went back to the hospital. My mother came rushing and happily embraced me. PCSO (Philippines Charity and Sweepstakes Office) had given us financial support. Gods amazing grace did not end there, after the operation the doctor declared that my father was free from any danger.
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Today, problems are still crashing our lives but these only makes us strong. It teaches us to be humble. It makes us the person we are now. It builds our character. They say that our character will sprout amidst our trials.
Wednesday, September 30, 2009
job
I quit my job and apply for a scholarship in one of the university in our town. The school grants me a student assistantship program wherein I am required to work everyday for a 21 units tuition fee. Sometimes, it’s difficult for me especially during enrollment. There are always conflicts between my working schedules and classes. There are times when we have to buy books or projects, to afford them I just skip meals and walk to and from the school. Even it’s hard, I endures them just to finish my education. But still, there are problems that arises, and that is our major problems. The school is expected to pay for only 21 units, further that we should carry the cost. Sometimes I am required to take 26 or more units. We couldn’t afford it so I just under load. Another problem is we still have to pay for my miscellaneous, we find it difficult to pay since my father has no permanent jobs. We were fortunate if he could found 3 to 4 days work in a week. My father is becoming weak again and he still had his ulcer which pains him almost everyday. We really have to pull together to make it through. Because of these, I am afraid if I could still continue without further support. I am excelling in class. Last semester, I was given recognition as one of the president’s lister - a prestigious award given for having outstanding grades in the university.
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Monday, September 21, 2009
Scholarship application essay
It’s been four years since my father had nearly die in an accident. After his survival, I was forced to stop my college studies. Because of the accident, there are things which he could no longer do, and that includes working. My mother looked for a job which enables him to look for our father at the same time. I decided to help my mother, I applied as a saleslady. I was working for nearly three years when my father decided to start doing light jobs again. I’m still pinning my hope on education; I know that it’s the only way I could get to free us from poverty. I ask my parents if I could go back to school. I know that it’s hard financially but we can make it.
I quit my job and apply for a scholarship in one of the university in our town. The school grants me a student assistantship program wherein I am required to work everyday for a 21 units tuition fee. Sometimes, it’s difficult for me especially during enrollment. There are always conflicts between my working schedules and classes. There are times when we have to buy books or projects, to afford them I just skip meals and walk to and from the school. Even it’s hard, I endures them just to finish my education. But still, there are problems that arises, and that is our major problems. The school is expected to pay for only 21 units, further that we should carry the cost. Sometimes I am required to take 26 or more units. We couldn’t afford it so I just under load. Another problem is we still have to pay for my miscellaneous, we find it difficult to pay since my father has no permanent jobs. We were fortunate if he could found 3 to 4 days work in a week. My father is becoming weak again and he still had his ulcer which pains him almost everyday. We really have to pull together to make it through. Because of these, I am afraid if I could still continue without further support. I am excelling in class. Last semester, I was given recognition as one of the president’s lister - a prestigious award given for having outstanding grades in the university.
That is why I am asking for your good organization to please help me. I am asking for a miscellaneous fee support. I know that I could excel more if I would be given further help. I don’t want to waste the second chance given to me to continue my education. I just hope that with your help I could finished my long time dream.
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